Friday, 24 February 2012

Christchurch
By Lucy Ginn
Christchurch
                    Shaking
                                 Shaking
                                              Shaking
Everybody
                  Running
                                Running
                                              Running
Buildings
                Falling
                           Falling
                                      Falling
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15 comments:

  1. Mrs Morris24 February 2012 at 15:43

    You are a clever poet, Lucy. Repetitive words make it sound good.

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  2. Sanford24 February 2012 at 17:13

    This is a fantastic poem about christchurch.Goody Goody Gum Drops
    ,Lucy

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  3. rachel24 February 2012 at 18:50

    hi lucy really good poem i really like it welldone

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  4. Levi24 February 2012 at 20:46

    I love your poem about Christchurch it is really interesting.

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  5. jack26 February 2012 at 19:06

    I like your poem lucy

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  6. jacob27 February 2012 at 17:22

    I like your poem a lot lucy :)

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  7. Anna Ginn28 February 2012 at 13:00

    Hi Lucy, very proud of you Lucy for writing this lovely poem. Lots of love Mumxx

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  8. sarah28 February 2012 at 15:47

    Hi Lucy,

    I love your poem and i think that it is very smart of you to of writen that poem by yourself. Seal of approval to you Lucy

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  9. breanne28 February 2012 at 18:57

    You are right about everything in that poem it happen's alot there in chrischurch 'Lucy'
    e-aw,e-aw,e-aw.

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  10. Karen28 February 2012 at 22:08

    Hi Lucy,

    I really like your poem. :)

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  11. Claire29 February 2012 at 16:52

    I like how you set out the poem Lucy.
    From Claire

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  12. Annie29 February 2012 at 18:54

    Good work, Lucy!
    Ding~a~ling,ding~a~ling!

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  13. Jasmine1 March 2012 at 06:41

    Everything is true in that poem, Lucy.

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  14. georgia7 March 2012 at 16:01

    Good work Lucy i like how you did repeated text you are the bees knees from georgia

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  15. Vera8 March 2012 at 16:36

    I like your work Lucy its cool how the words are shaking or Falling !!!!! ;]

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