Cross country By Grace Li
Cross countrycross country fun,fun,fun
Cross country cross country passing my friends
Cross country cross country when will it end?
Cross country cross country running round and round
Cross country cross country running down down down
Cross country cross country I see the finish
Cross country cross country finally we finish!
By Grace Li
wow grace ! thats an awsome pome ! I like how you tried to make every thing ryme .when I do cross contry i do every thing that you have written .
ReplyDeleteI'm sure that lots of other people will like your writing too.
from holly in rm 15
Rose.w from room 15
ReplyDeleteI like how it rymes and you say the wolds 3 times.
It is a relly good pome.
it must be fun.
hi grace
ReplyDeleteyour poem is so good i love the way it rhymes how do you right poems like that
from your friend Brielle
Hi Grace I really liked your poem beacuse it had lots of detail.
ReplyDeleteHi Grace,
ReplyDeleteI love how you put in lots of punctuation. I would never write fun, fun, fun I think it's torcher!
Next time you could commars at the end of each line. Apart from that it was fabulous.
From Sarah
Hi Grace L.
ReplyDeleteI like how you did rhymes in all the paragraghs and I also liked how you repeated "Cross Country." in every sentance.
Your poem is super! I think you should be a writer one day!
Excellent poem Grace,
ReplyDeleteDo you really think cross country is fun?
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