Cross Country
Cross Country Cross Country
Left foot, right foot
Back to my left foot
I see my friends
I catch them up
A teacher comes
Off we run!
We cross roads
We pass friends
Legs aching
Still heaps to go
Puffing, puffing, puffing
I’m nearly there
But I’m running out of breath
Finally the end is here!
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wow karen! its a fantastic poem! you had added lots of ryming words . have you been doing what you wrote? your class has been working on poems so much.i'am sure lots of people will like your poem.
ReplyDeleteWOW Karen cross country does make your legs very saw!
ReplyDeleteHi Karen,
ReplyDeleteI love how you made your poem rhyme. Next time you could come up with some more interesting words because some of the ideas are kind of the same but twisted around. You tried very hard.
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